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Well it's not too bad. Some of the stuff you could do to have made it better would have been to have their mouths move more than just writing out the words in MS paint. It wasn't really that bad considering a first time music video. It is a little off in some places, but honestly I couldn't hardly tell. I think it would have been good to see a credits screen or something afterwards, and then have a replay button instead of returning to the start screen, but you can integrate all that good stuff later in your next creation.
Hope some of what I say helps out a bit.
3/5 and 7/10. Good job on this. It wasn't bad at all, just that you got a couple things to work on for next time.
-AJF
Author's Response:
It does help! Except I didn't use MS paint. But oh well.
Thanks for reviewing
-Shnibs
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I played the first version, and I'm really happy you made a game of it. You get my 5 and 10. :)
I just feel bad for the poor little mouse...
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I liked it. It was good for being new.
It made me smile. I'm thinking you're on your way to being very good.
Keep up all the good work! :D
5/5 and 10/10 from me.
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I think it's pretty neat. Simple, but neat.
Only room I could see improvement is that you could turn it more into a game.
Author's Response:
Thanks :D Sort of not a game until there is something to play for... just stuck as to what that should be.
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Now Navi will shut the fuck up for good. :D
Great series so far, can't wait for the last 2. :)
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Doesn't matter if it's a $30 dvd, or a free flash cartoon, it's all still under copyrighting, and stealing is bad.
Great prank on the people who would actually try stealing flash cartoons.
At first I thought there was a way, you got me there. Lol.
I wasn't planning on stealing anything though. I'm a viewer.
Just here to make comments and vote. :)
5/5 10/10. I may be the only one but oh well.
Kind of sad though what some people will do for free publicity too.
I'MA FIRIN MAH LAZORR!!! on those who pirate flash cartoons.
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Great Game Concept. Great Game.
Very hard. No need to change anything. It's perfect how it is.
Grats on a great game.
Can't wait to see this get front paged.
5/ and 10/10
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This series is awesome. Definitely worth all the time you put into it.
This really does look like something you'd watch on TV on the weekends.
You are very talented indeed.
I truly cannot wait for ep #4. No rush of course, this taking 6-10mths to create must be absolutely tiring. But all of that time taken is very well reflected in the cartoon.
Tywo makes me laugh.
Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thanks man, hope you mean weekend evenings. :)
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This whole thing was just so artistic. I really liked it.
Just the fluidity made everything so interesting.
I watched through it twice. I just thought it was great.
5/5 and 10/10 from me. No question.
Author's Response:
Hell hath no fury like an Apple Jack scorned! :O
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I think this is amazing. It's a very good and original idea. Everything flowed so smoothly, it's like watching a t.v. cartoon short. It's totally worth a 7/5 and 15/10, but those scores can't be given. So I'll deal with the max allowed.
Great toon. 5/5 and 10/10.
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