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Well it's not too bad. Some of the stuff you could do to have made it better would have been to have their mouths move more than just writing out the words in MS paint. It wasn't really that bad considering a first time music video. It is a little off in some places, but honestly I couldn't hardly tell. I think it would have been good to see a credits screen or something afterwards, and then have a replay button instead of returning to the start screen, but you can integrate all that good stuff later in your next creation.
Hope some of what I say helps out a bit.
3/5 and 7/10. Good job on this. It wasn't bad at all, just that you got a couple things to work on for next time.
-AJF
Author's Response:
It does help! Except I didn't use MS paint. But oh well.
Thanks for reviewing
-Shnibs
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I played the first version, and I'm really happy you made a game of it. You get my 5 and 10. :)
I just feel bad for the poor little mouse...
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I liked it. It was good for being new.
It made me smile. I'm thinking you're on your way to being very good.
Keep up all the good work! :D
5/5 and 10/10 from me.
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